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The Topic: On the Black Marble

Kiki
Here is a haiku I composed:

O shiny marble,
In your corner you do sit
You roll in blackness

Responses:
The Evil Black Marble
Nifty. But I don't know if we want to turn this into the Conversatron poety corner. It'd be only a matter of time before the dirty limericks started up.
Crow T. Robot
There once was a marble from Atari
Black like the night, but not as starry
When he tarried near the ledge,
Blue pushed him over the edge
And the marble never got to say "I'm sorry"

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